As this course progressed, I feel that I have better skills and understandings of the local and global revisions. I can see the changes from my first paper, Literacy Narrative Project, to my final paper, Big Data Project. I can see the changes in the development of my paragraphs, the structures of my sentences, transitions, and analysis. In my first paper I struggled more on developmental issues of my paragraphs and transitions from paragraph to paragraph. As I kept learning, the better I got at getting a good grip on how to improve these issues. As you can see in the first picture, I highlighted the changes I made to my first paper. This helps to show my first try on the local and global revisions. Each class and project provided me with skills that I will continue to work on. I do feel that I have made a great improvement in this area.

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